Irk's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Worm!!?]

Nice animation, but short

You're a great animator, as I can see, but you really ought to make longer movies. This movie was original, but about a minute too short. You've got potential, as I can see, so keep at it.

[SSBM Collab]

Nothing short of a bad movie

Let's leave a good critisizing review, shall we?

Graphics: Mostly they (the sprites) were overtweened and blurry, so I didn't really notice any true pixelated glory. You may want to try your hand at drawn movies for a few months before coming back to collaborations, so as to make sure you have a good sense of quality work.

Style: Style? I'm sorry to say this, but sprites are overused. Sure, there are a few good spriters out there, but unfortunately you haven't yet reached their standards.

Sound: You actually did OK finding sounds here, so it seems I won't be able to give much critisism on the subject. You may, however, want to add a little more variation to the sounds rather than "OWOWOW" and other such generic sprite sounds.

Violence: Well, I must say it was violent, but needlessly so. You may want to add more variation to the fighting and keep us from falling asleep.

Interactivity: Well, you have a menu, preloader, and scene select, but other than that you can't expect much out a movie. Not much critisism to give here...

Humor: Not funny, so you may want to add a little more humor if you plan on getting a higher score in the portal; NGers love humor.

Now if you're displeased with my review, don't go bitching about me not worshipping every little second of this movie. You've got potential, so if you don't give up on your animation, you'll soon be up on the frontpage (well, maybe not TOO soon). Good luck with that, anyway.

LilDwarf responds:

Finally a good critical review. Thanks I'll take keep in mind your advice.

[Animator vs. Animation]

Very Creative

This has to be one of the most creative flashes I've seen on NG. It has great animation, makes great use of the Flash interface, and is overall one of NG's best flashes to date. Keep it up!

[Blue Neon FBF]

Bad

The FBF was far too unsmooth, it lacked good visuals, and overall it was pretty bad. I think you're gonna need to put a lot more work and effort into your animations and get out of that "i'm only 14 geez i realy wunna mAk teh gud flash moovy!!!" phase. Better luck next time.

TheFunk responds:

Okay, please point out to me where i said anything remotely like:

"i'm only 14 geez i realy wunna mAk teh gud flash moovy!!!"

Please show me, i'd love to see where i said that.

[Star Day:Rivals]

Another great cartoon by another great artist!

I don't know why I'm giving it all tens, I just feel like it (except interactivity). Well, keep it up!

[B/W Cartoon About Berries]

You're either...

very sick or a genius.

['mazin FBF collab]

Not bad

Most of the parts were pretty good, but I have the feeling Mc. Funk's part was what brought the score down. Also, the music stopped about one third of the way through. It would've been a lot nicer had it gone through the entire movie. On another note, I liked Jarco's menu and some of the parts were actually pretty good! Just keep improving, and maybe one day you'll make a front page collab!

[the reason we are alive]

I WANNA KNOW WHAT KILLED MY BOY!

*Goes off and weeps in corner*

You've seen one too many westerns old man!

[Halloween dissoultion]

Hey there!

I'm from NGC too! (but of course you know that lol) Well anyways nice Flash and I hope to see more from you!

[Brushed*1]

I'm from NGC too!

I'm sure this Flash will get at least a 3.50. Keep up the good work (adds to favorites)!